Philadelphia Eagles Update Front Office Structure and Hire New Staff
Introduction
The Philadelphia Eagles have announced several changes to job titles and the hiring of new staff members within their football operations and scouting departments.
Main Body
A key part of these changes is the promotion of Adam Berry to assistant General Manager. Berry, a former finance executive at Goldman Sachs who joined the team in 2023, has risen quickly through the organization. It is also noted that he is the brother of Andrew Berry, the General Manager of the Cleveland Browns. Furthermore, the team has hired Mike Maccagnan as a personnel executive. Maccagnan previously served as the General Manager for the New York Jets from 2015 until his departure. He will work alongside Joe Douglas, whose title has been changed to senior vice president of player personnel. At the same time, the Eagles have updated the job titles for many employees in the operations and scouting divisions, including staff members like Dan Ryan and Phil Bhaya. Additionally, the organization has hired four new employees: Clara Montenegro DuBerke, Samantha Harvey, Caspian Svenson, and Fred Hale.
Conclusion
In summary, the Philadelphia Eagles have reorganized their management structure and expanded their scouting and operations teams.
Learning
đ Breaking the 'Simple Sentence' Habit
At A2, you likely write like this: "Adam Berry is a manager. He worked at Goldman Sachs. He joined the team in 2023."
To reach B2, you must stop making lists of short sentences and start using Complex Modifiers. This is the secret to sounding professional and fluid.
đĄ The 'Who/Which' Bridge
Look at this sentence from the text:
"Berry, a former finance executive at Goldman Sachs who joined the team in 2023, has risen quickly..."
Instead of three small sentences, the author uses a Relative Clause ("who joined the team in 2023") to add extra information without stopping the flow. This allows the reader to keep the main subject (Berry) in mind while receiving background details.
đ ī¸ Level Up Your Grammar
| A2 Style (Basic) | B2 Style (Fluent) |
|---|---|
| Mike Maccagnan is a personnel executive. He worked for the Jets. | Mike Maccagnan, who previously served as GM for the Jets, is now a personnel executive. |
| Joe Douglas has a new title. He is now senior vice president. | Joe Douglas, whose title has been changed to senior vice president, will work with Maccagnan. |
Pro Tip: Notice the word "whose". This is a B2 powerhouse word. It replaces "his/her" when you are connecting two ideas.
Example: "I have a friend. His car is red." "I have a friend whose car is red."
⥠Vocabulary Shift: 'The Corporate Flow'
To move toward B2, replace basic verbs with Operational Verbs found in the article:
- Instead of 'changed', use 'reorganized'
- Instead of 'got a better job', use 'risen through the organization'
- Instead of 'added', use 'expanded'