Analysis of Recent Domestic Violence Increases and Legal Actions
Introduction
Recent crimes in Washington and New York show a worrying pattern where domestic violence becomes deadly after a relationship ends.
Main Body
In Washington State, the murder of Gloria Choi followed a period of instability. During the trial of Billy Rickman, evidence showed that he moved from emotional manipulation and financial abuse to physical violence and illegal electronic tracking. Although there was a court order for Rickman to stay away and multiple reports of harassment, the police did not arrest him before he killed Choi on January 2, 2022. The prosecution proved that Rickman used a rented car to find Choi and shot her fourteen times. Consequently, Rickman was convicted of first-degree murder and sentenced to life in prison. Furthermore, a lawsuit has been filed against the City of Lakewood, asserting that the death could have been prevented if the police had acted sooner. Similar patterns of violence have appeared in New York. Robert Schreiber was arrested after breaking into a home in Patchogue, where he allegedly stabbed the 22-year-old son of an ex-partner seven times. This attack happened shortly after Schreiber's relationship ended on April 17. He now faces charges of attempted murder and burglary, which could lead to 25 years in prison. Additionally, authorities in Long Island arrested Rony Yahir Alvarenga Rivera, who surrendered after stabbing a coworker and a roommate, showing a wider trend of violent conflicts in the area.
Conclusion
While Billy Rickman has received his final sentence and the city faces a lawsuit, the cases against Schreiber and Rivera are still moving through the legal system.
Learning
đ The 'Logic Jump': From Simple to Sophisticated
At the A2 level, you usually connect ideas with and, but, or because. To reach B2, you need Connectors of Consequence and Addition. These are the 'glue' that make your writing sound professional and academic.
đ Spotting the B2 Logic
Look at how the article moves from a fact to a result. Instead of saying "He killed her, so he went to prison," the text uses:
*"Consequently, Rickman was convicted..."
What is 'Consequently'? It is a formal way of saying "as a result." It tells the reader that the second event happened specifically because of the first one.
đ ī¸ Expanding Your Toolbelt
To stop sounding like a beginner, replace your basic words with these B2 alternatives found in the text:
| A2 Word (Basic) | B2 Word (Advanced) | Example from Text |
|---|---|---|
| Also | Furthermore | Furthermore, a lawsuit has been filed... |
| Also / Too | Additionally | Additionally, authorities in Long Island arrested... |
| So | Consequently | Consequently, Rickman was convicted... |
đĄ Pro-Tip: The Comma Rule
Notice that Consequently, Furthermore, and Additionally are all followed by a comma.
The Pattern: .
Example:
- â Furthermore he was late. (Too simple/incorrect)
- â Furthermore, he was late. (B2 Standard)
đ¯ The 'Legal' Vocabulary Shift
B2 students don't just say "the police caught him." They use precise verbs. Note these shifts from the article:
- Asserting Instead of "saying" (used when claiming something is true in a legal way).
- Convicted Instead of "found guilty" (the official legal term).
- Surrendered Instead of "gave up" (specifically used for criminals giving themselves to police).