A Person Dies in Shooting at Arcadia Lake
Introduction
Many young people met at Arcadia Lake in Oklahoma. One person died and 22 people were hurt. Police arrested an 18-year-old man.
Main Body
Many people went to the lake on Sunday. They saw the party on social media. Two women started a fight. Then, gang members started to fight too. Many people used guns. They shot more than 80 times. 23 people got hurt. Six of these people were children. Avianna Smith-Gray was 18 years old. She died from a shot to the head on May 5. Her family told the public about her death. Jaylan A. Davis is 18 years old. He went to the police on Wednesday. He is in jail now. Police think another person is also guilty.
Conclusion
One man is in jail for murder. 23 people were hurt in the shooting.
Learning
π The 'Past' Secret
Look at how the story tells us things that already happened. We just add -ed to the end of the action word.
- meet β meeted (Wait! This is a special word: met)
- start β started
- arrest β arrested
Simple Rule: If the action is finished add -ed.
π₯ Who is who?
Notice how the text describes people using simple numbers and ages:
- An 18-year-old man (One person, age 18)
- Six of these people (A small group)
- Many young people (A big group)
Tip: To describe a person's age as a label, use hyphens: 18-year-old.